MASCULINE RHYME
Rhyme with stress on the last syllable, for example:
And he came to my lips
And the sinner tore out my tongue.
A.S. Pushkin
See also clause
Dictionary of literary terms. 2012
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(origin is debatable: from Greek ruJmoV or Old German rim, number) - consonance at the end of two or more verses. While … - RHYME in the Modern Encyclopedic Dictionary:
(from the Greek rhythmos - foldability, proportionality), the consonance of the ends of verses (or hemistiches, the so-called internal rhyme), marking their boundaries and connecting... - RHYME
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, -y, w. Consonance of the ends of poetic lines. Men's r. (with emphasis on the last syllable of the verse). Women's r. (with emphasis on... - RHYME in the Big Russian Encyclopedic Dictionary:
RHYTHMA (from the Greek rhythmos - consistency, proportionality), the consonance of the ends of verses (or hemistiches, the so-called internal rhyme), marking their boundaries and connecting... - RHYME in Collier's Dictionary:
the use of similar-sounding words, usually at the ends of poetic lines, as well as the words themselves. The most common type of rhyme... - RHYME in the Complete Accented Paradigm according to Zaliznyak:
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Rhyme and its varieties
Rhyme is the repetition of more or less similar combinations of sounds that connect the endings of two or more lines or symmetrically located parts of poetic lines. In Russian classical versification, the main feature of rhyme is the coincidence of stressed vowels. Rhyme marks the end of a verse (clause) with a sound repetition, emphasizing the pause between lines, and thereby the rhythm of the verse.
Depending on the location of stress in rhyming words, rhyme can be: masculine, feminine, dactylic, hyperdactylic, exact and inaccurate.
Masculine rhyme
Masculine - rhyme with stress on the last syllable in the line.
Both the sea and the storm rocked our canoe;
I, sleepy, was given over to all the whims of the waves.
There were two infinities in me,
And they played with me willfully.
Feminine rhyme
Feminine - with emphasis on the penultimate syllable in the line.
Quiet night, late summer,
How the stars glow in the sky,
As if under their gloomy light
The dormant fields are ripening.
Dactylic rhyme
Dactylic - with stress on the third syllable from the end of the line, which repeats the pattern of dactyl - -_ _ (stressed, unstressed, unstressed), which, in fact, is the name of this rhyme.
A girl in a field with a willow pipe,
Why did you hurt the spring twig?
She cries at her lips like a morning oriole,
cries more and more bitterly and more and more inconsolably.
Hyperdactylic rhyme
Hyperdactylic - with stress on the fourth and subsequent syllables from the end of the line. This rhyme is very rare in practice. It appeared in works of oral folklore, where size as such is not always visible. The fourth syllable from the end of the verse is not a joke! Well, an example of such a rhyme goes like this:
The goblin scratches his beard,
He's gloomily trimming a stick.
Depending on the coincidence of sounds, accurate and inaccurate rhymes are distinguished.
Rhyme accurate and inaccurate
Rhyme - repetition of more or less similar combinations of sounds at the ends of poetic lines or symmetrically located parts of poetic lines; In Russian classical versification, the main feature of rhyme is the coincidence of stressed vowels.
(O.S. Akhmanova, Dictionary of Linguistic Terms, 1969)
Why was Dunno wrong when he claimed that “stick - herring” is also a rhyme? Because he did not know that in fact it is not sounds that rhyme, but phonemes (a sound is a particular realization of a phoneme) (R. Yakobson), which have a number of distinctive features. And the coincidence of some of these features is enough to make rhyming sound possible. The fewer coinciding features of a phoneme, the more distant, the “worse” the consonance.
Consonant phonemes differ:
1) by place of education
2) by method of education
4) by hardness and softness
5) by deafness and voicedness
These signs are obviously unequal. Thus, the phoneme P coincides with the phoneme B in all respects, except for deafness-voicedness (P - voiceless, B - voiced). This difference creates an “almost” exact rhyme: trenches - individuals. Phonemes P and T differ in the place of formation (labial and anterior lingual). OkoPe - osoTe - is also perceived as a rhyming sound, although more distant.
The first three features create differences between phonemes that are more significant than the last two. We can designate the difference between phonemes according to the first three characteristics as two conventional units (cu); for the last two - as one. Phonemes that differ by 1-2 units are consonant. Differences of 3 or more units do not retain consonance to our ears. For example: P and G differ by three units. (place of formation - 2, voiceless-voiced - 1). And trenches - legs can hardly be considered a rhyme in our time. Even fewer are trenches - roses, where P and W differ by 4 cu. (place of education, method of education).
So, let's mark the rows of consonant consonants. These are, first of all, pairs of hard and soft: T - T", K - K", S - S", etc., but such substitutions are resorted to quite rarely, for example, of the three pairs of rhymes, “otkoS”e - roSy ", "slopes - dew" and "slopes - roses" the second and third options are more preferable.
Substitution of voiceless-voiced voices is perhaps the most common: P-B, T-D, K-G, S-Z, Sh-Zh, F-V (for god - deep, bends - linden, dragonflies - braids, people - raid ).
The stops (mode of formation) P-T-K (voiceless) and B-D-G (voiced) respond well to each other. The corresponding two rows of fricatives are F-S-SH-H (voiceless) and V-Z-ZH (voiced). X has no voiced counterpart, but goes well and often with K. B-V and B-M are equivalent. M-N-L-R in various combinations are very productive. Soft versions of the latter are often combined with J and B (Russian[rossiJi] - blue - strength - beautiful).
So, concluding our conversation about exact and imprecise rhyme, we repeat that exact rhyme is when the vowels and consonants included in the consonant endings of the verses basically coincide. The accuracy of the rhyme is also increased by the consonance of the consonant sounds immediately preceding the last stressed vowel in rhyming verses. An imprecise rhyme is based on the consonance of one, or less often, two sounds.
Rhyme systems
Previously, in a school literature course, the basic methods of rhyming were necessarily studied in order to give knowledge about the variety of positions in a stanza of rhyming pairs (or more) of words, which should be a help to anyone who writes poetry at least once in their life. But everything is forgotten, and the majority of authors are somehow in no hurry to diversify their stanzas.
Adjacent - rhyming of adjacent verses: the first with the second, the third with the fourth (aabb) (the same letters indicate the endings of verses that rhyme with each other).
This is the most common and obvious rhyming system. This method can be used even by children in kindergarten and has an advantage in the selection of rhymes (the associative pair appears in the mind immediately, it is not clogged with intermediate lines). Such stanzas have greater dynamics and a faster reading pace.
The scarlet light of dawn was woven on the lake,
On the forest, wood grouse are crying with ringing sounds.
An oriole is crying somewhere, burying itself in a hollow.
Only I don’t cry - my soul is light.
The next method - cross rhyme - also appealed to a large number of the writing public.
Cross - rhyme of the first verse with the third, the second with the fourth (abab)
Although the scheme of such a rhyme seems to be a little more complicated, it is more flexible rhythmically and allows you to better convey the necessary mood. Yes, and such poems are easier to learn - the first pair of lines, as it were, pulls out of memory the second pair that rhymes with it (while with the previous method everything breaks up into separate couplets).
I love the storm in early May,
When the first thunder of spring
As if frolicking and playing,
Rumbling in the blue sky.
The third method - ring (in other sources - girded, enveloping) - already has less representation in the total mass of poems.
Ring (girdled, enveloping) - the first verse - with the fourth, and the second - with the third. (abba)
This scheme can be somewhat more difficult for beginners (the first line is, as it were, erased by the subsequent pair of rhyming lines).
I looked, standing over the Neva,
Like Isaac the Giant
In the darkness of the frosty fog
The golden dome glowed.
Finally, woven rhyme has many patterns. This is the general name for complex types of rhyming, for example: abvbv, abvvbba, etc.
Far from the sun and nature,
Far from light and art,
Far from life and love
Your younger years will flash by
Living feelings die
Your dreams will be shattered.
In conclusion, it is useful to note that one should not always adhere so rigidly, strictly and dogmatically to certain canonical forms and templates, because, as in any form of art, there is always a place for the original in poetry. But, nevertheless, before rushing into the unbridled inventing of something new and not entirely known, it always does not hurt to make sure that you are still familiar with the basic canons.
Stanzas
Stanza - from Greek. strophe - revolution, circling. Such a complex rhythmic unit of poetic works as the stanza is based on the order of rhymes in poetry.
A stanza is a group of verses with a specific rhyme arrangement, usually repeated in other equal groups. In most cases, a stanza is a complete syntactic whole.
The most common types of stanzas in classical poetry of the past were: quatrains, octaves, terzas. The smallest of the stanzas is a couplet.
There are also stanzas:
Oneginskie
ballad
odic
limericks
Quatrains
Quatrain (quatrain) is the most common type of stanza, familiar to everyone from early childhood. Popular due to the abundance of rhyming systems.
Octaves
An octave is an eight-line stanza in which the first verse rhymes with the third and fifth, the second verse with the fourth and sixth, and the seventh verse with the eighth.
Octave scheme: abababvv
At six years old he was a very cute child
And even, as a child, he played pranks;
At twelve he looked sad
And although he was good, he was somehow frail.
Inessa said proudly,
That the method changed his nature:
A young philosopher, despite his years,
He was quiet and modest, as if by nature.
I must confess to you that I am still inclined
Don't trust Inessa's theories.
Her husband and I were friends;
I know, very complex excesses
An unsuccessful family is born
When the father is a rake in character,
And mommy is a prude. Not without reason
The son's inclinations take after his father!
Falls on the last syllable of rhyming words.
In the Russian poetic tradition it is more often used in alternation with female rhyme, but there are also poems built only on male rhyme:
Today is a bad day:
Osip Mandelstam
The grasshopper choir is sleeping,
And the shadow of the gloomy rocks -
Darker than gravestones.
Lermontov’s poem “Mtsyri” was written in exclusively masculine rhyme.
Designation
If a form has a particular way of rhyming and it is important to indicate which lines have a masculine rhyme, then lowercase letters are used. So for the first poem the rhyme pattern: aa, and for the second: abab, in contrast to feminine rhymes, which use capital letters to indicate them.
see also
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See Rhyme. Literary encyclopedia. At 11 vol.; M.: Publishing House of the Communist Academy, Soviet Encyclopedia, Fiction. Edited by V. M. Fritsche, A. V. Lunacharsky. 1929 1939 … Literary encyclopedia
masculine rhyme- rhyme with stress on the last syllable. Rubric: structure of a poetic work Antonym/correlative: female rhyme Gender: rhyme Example: fire palm of goodness ribs Lermontov's poem Mtsyri is written in iambic tetrameter, with normal meter for this... ...
masculine rhyme- a rhyme with an emphasis on the last syllable, for example: And he came to my lips and tore out my sinful tongue. A.S. Pushkin See also clause... Dictionary of literary terms
masculine rhyme- Rhyme with stress on the last syllable... Dictionary of many expressions
masculine rhyme- MAN'S RHYME words connected by rhyme, ending with a stressed syllable. There are different types of open M. r. with a vowel sound at the end (the soul is breathing, the window is long ago) and a closed M. r., ending with a consonant sound (the wolf is silent, the door is a beast). Usually in... ... Poetic dictionary
- (Greek rhythmos). The consonance of the words with which the poems end; monophonic ending of the verse. Dictionary of foreign words included in the Russian language. Chudinov A.N., 1910. RHYME Greek. rhythmos. Consonant ending of verses. Explanation 25000... ... Dictionary of foreign words of the Russian language
RHYME, rhymes, female. (Greek rhythmos) (lit.). In versification there is consonance between the ends of poetic lines. Masculine rhyme (with stress on the last syllable), feminine rhyme (on the penultimate syllable), dactylic rhyme (on the third from the end). Rich, poor rhyme... ... Ushakov's Explanatory Dictionary
rhyme- (from the Greek rhythmos proportionality) the consonance of the ends of verses (or hemistiches), marking their boundaries and connecting them with each other. Rubric: structure of a poetic work Whole: sound organization of a verse Type: poor rhyme, rich rhyme ... Terminological dictionary-thesaurus on literary criticism
When writing this article, material was used from the Encyclopedic Dictionary of Brockhaus and Efron (1890-1907). Wiktionary has an entry for "rhyme"... Wikipedia
rhyme masculine- see male rhyme... Terminological dictionary-thesaurus on literary criticism
Masculine rhyme
MEN´ I RI´ FMA- words connected by rhyme that end with a stressed syllable. There are different types of open M. r. with a vowel sound at the end (soul - breathing, window - long ago) and a closed M. r., ending with a consonant sound (wolf - silent, door - beast). Usually in the poems of M. r. alternate with feminine or dactylic rhymes. But sometimes poets write poems or even poems that are expressed only in M. r. This is M. Lermontov’s poem “Mtsyri”, where there is a continuous M. r. gives the work a character of energy and masculinity; here is the beginning of “Mtsyri”:
Not many years ago
Where they merge, they make noise,
Hugging like two sisters,
The streams of Aragva and Kura,
There was a monastery. From behind the mountain
And now the pedestrian sees
Collapsed gate posts
And the towers, and the church vault...
Some chapters of A. Tvardovsky’s poem “The Country of Ant” are written in M. river, for example, the beginning of the poem:
From morning to noon he travels,
The road is long.
The light is white on four sides,
And above are clouds.
Longing for my native warmth,
A chain in the distance
They're flying, but what's on the ground?
The cranes don't know.
Poetic dictionary. - M.: Soviet Encyclopedia. Kvyatkovsky A.P., scientific. ed. I. Rodnyanskaya. 1966 .
See what “male rhyme” is in other dictionaries:
Masculine rhyme- see Rhyme. Literary encyclopedia. At 11 vol.; M.: Publishing House of the Communist Academy, Soviet Encyclopedia, Fiction. Edited by V. M. Fritsche, A. V. Lunacharsky. 1929 1939 … Literary encyclopedia
Masculine rhyme- Main article: Rhyme Masculine rhyme is a type of rhyme in which the stress falls on the last syllable of rhyming words. The grain in the fields did not ripen, but disappeared, there was famine, the people were dying... Vasily Zhukovsky (translation from Robert Southey) In... ... Wikipedia
masculine rhyme- rhyme with stress on the last syllable. Rubric: structure of a poetic work Antonym/correlative: female rhyme Gender: rhyme Example: fire palm of goodness ribs Lermontov's poem Mtsyri is written in iambic tetrameter, with normal meter for this... ... Terminological dictionary-thesaurus on literary criticism
masculine rhyme- a rhyme with an emphasis on the last syllable, for example: And he came to my lips and tore out my sinful tongue. A.S. Pushkin See also clause... Dictionary of literary terms
masculine rhyme- Rhyme with stress on the last syllable... Dictionary of many expressions
RHYME- (Greek rhythmos). The consonance of the words with which the poems end; monophonic ending of the verse. Dictionary of foreign words included in the Russian language. Chudinov A.N., 1910. RHYME Greek. rhythmos. Consonant ending of verses. Explanation 25000... ... Dictionary of foreign words of the Russian language
RHYME- RHYME, rhymes, female. (Greek rhythmos) (lit.). In versification there is consonance between the ends of poetic lines. Masculine rhyme (with stress on the last syllable), feminine rhyme (on the penultimate syllable), dactylic rhyme (on the third from the end). Rich, poor rhyme... ... Ushakov's Explanatory Dictionary
I will not retell the history of the origin of “gender” in rhyme. I will only remind you how to determine it: if rhyming lines end with a stressed syllable, then their rhyme is masculine. If the stressed syllable is the penultimate syllable in the rhyming lines, then it is female. And this has nothing to do with which poets of different genders prefer. In addition, a rhyme, unlike a person, can have several other types of gender, but about them another time.
A man's rhyme is a very capricious rhyme. It is very easy to coarse, vulgarize, mutilate, so you need to work with it carefully.
The best male rhymes are rich and absolute. In the first case, everything in rhyming syllables is the same: the stressed vowel, its preceding consonant, the subsequent consonant or consonants:
Uma is a mess, an elephant is a bow, an ax is an emphasis, fate is a prayer, seed is hanging, rye is good
Remember that you need to focus on sounds, not letters, and in Russian they are always stunned at the end of a word in the absence of a junction with another word.
In an absolute rhyme, the preceding and following consonants are the same, but the stressed vowel rhymes with its softened version:
The ray is prickly, the slave is you, the pants are shadows, the notes are crumpling, the lips are slashing
If you look carefully, it is noticeable that precisely in the case of masculine absolute rhyme, the feeling of saturation noticeably decreases if the rhyming syllable is open, that is, ending with a vowel. So the whims began, so to speak.
A good rhyme is usually obtained if the rhyming syllables differ by one consonant, either the preceding or the following (one of the following):
Forest - climb, pendant - glass, zhupan - hooligan, tomato - prison, peace - don't be tormented, window - wall
Yes, the semivowel “Y” usually comes after a consonant in a poem.
However, the described technique leads to noticeably worse results if the stressed vowel is softened or the subsequent consonant added/subtracted/replaced belongs to any “hissing-whistle” (Zh, Z, S, Ts, Ch, Sh, Shch):
Body - palace, food - pencil, beam - on the floor, I'm done, squeal - feat, grove - old
These sounds love to attract attention. However, such a rhyme can also be made to sound richer by adding consonant matches in the preceding syllables:
Pencil - nonsense [RND], palace - domes [PL], prickly frost - I will split [RSKL], a hundred rings - on glass [STKL]
In the same way, you can enrich absolute rhyme in the case of an open syllable. Compare:
Lips - love =and= lips - ruin
slave - you =and= slave - rude
If the number of matching preceding consonants is increased and the matching preceding vowels are added, and in general alliteration and assonance between rhyming words and in the immediate parts of the line, then you can make beautiful a masculine assonant rhyme, which in itself looks extremely poor.
Compare:
GordA - moon = and = GordA - road
full - hand =and= full - shelfA
volumes - yourself = and = volumes - tones
It’s interesting that in this case the previous “hissing-whistle” concord is worth two or three of any others:
I'll take it - a daub, lie down - a prick, execute - to evil
In addition, it seems that some sounds work better in pairs as preceding consonants of a stressed syllable than others, and make the rhyme even richer when combined with the above techniques. These are, for example, V and B (foreheads - lions), M and N (dreams - catfish), P and B (crowds - pillars), Zh and Sh (breathe - hold), L and R (needles - games). However, the feeling of saturation will not appear if these consonants have different hardness (owl - self)
For examples, you can also refer to the lyrics of Bella Akhmadullina:
And a bench in an ancient park
Bela got up AND MUMMY,
and smelled vaguely of grapes
Georgian women NAMES.
("Georgian women's names")
I will remain faithful to her forever,
I write poetry at the edge of the TABLE,
and yet I am consumed by jealousy,
when other MASTERS create.
When he builds the red PIPE
stove maker on an uninhabited new house,
I also wipe on the GRASS
palms stained with clay.
(“Alien Craft”)
What to do if the sense of sound has not yet been developed, and the poem “was written as it was written”? Try to write down unsuccessful rhyming words and randomly select a dozen or two successful rhymes for each of them. One of these new rhymes can cause the desired flow of associations, which all that remains is to write down a line that expresses your thought as well or even more accurately.
(c) Lilith Mazikeena